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cerulean_skyArgh. So. Someone who has read the current issue of ![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
kirwan tell me:
Would the title of "Of Lilies White" be better if it was "Two Lilies, Of White And Red"? (Please note that I have changed the ending slightly, so that there are not two white lilies, but instead one of white and one of red. This is what I am trying to get across, but it is late and I am helpless, and I NEED A NEW TITLE IF I CHANGE THE END. Which I have. And it is late, and I am having panic attacks about this.)
Basically, my choices are:
-Two Lilies Of White And Red
-Two Lilies, Of White And Red
-Lilies Of White And Red
-Of Lilies White And Red
-One White And One Red
And I could go on and on with those, but you get the point.
Heeeeeelp?
kirwan tell me:Would the title of "Of Lilies White" be better if it was "Two Lilies, Of White And Red"? (Please note that I have changed the ending slightly, so that there are not two white lilies, but instead one of white and one of red. This is what I am trying to get across, but it is late and I am helpless, and I NEED A NEW TITLE IF I CHANGE THE END. Which I have. And it is late, and I am having panic attacks about this.)
Basically, my choices are:
-Two Lilies Of White And Red
-Two Lilies, Of White And Red
-Lilies Of White And Red
-Of Lilies White And Red
-One White And One Red
And I could go on and on with those, but you get the point.
Heeeeeelp?